Kia ora Jahesha, my name is Emma and I am a yr 8 at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about Future careers. I like how you have said what you hope your future career is and I like how you showed your research about becoming a vet and how you’ve written everything in your own words. When I looked at your blog post it made me think about what I would like my future career to be. Next time maybe you could add more detail on why you want to be a vet in the future. What is it about being a vet that catches your attention?
Kia ora Jahesha, my name is Emma and I am a yr 8 at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about Future careers. I like how you have said what you hope your future career is and I like how you showed your research about becoming a vet and how you’ve written everything in your own words. When I looked at your blog post it made me think about what I would like my future career to be. Next time maybe you could add more detail on why you want to be a vet in the future. What is it about being a vet that catches your attention?
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